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What is the importance of finding your passion?

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2024-06-26 2099

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I think the importance of finding passion is motivating in many ways.
I think it will be largely divided into two to motivate.
First, you can motivate yourself.
As you look for passion, you will be able to study deeply about yourself and find what you like or field.
If you find what you like, you may have a goal to live in or you may want to find a job that suits your field, so a new goal can be set.
Second, it can be a motivation to do the job.
As with the first reason, finding passion can help you focus on getting things done and find ways to get things done better.
In another way, you may be interested in collateral compensation and want to do things better.

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Hello, Yun!~
I appreciate you for always trying to support your responses from your point of view. I hope this helps you improve your verbal communication abilities as well.
Chammy
I think the importance of finding passion is motivating in many ways.
OR
>>I think that discovering one's passion may be motivating in a variety of ways. 
I think it will be largely divided into two to motivate.
OR
>>There can be 2 distinct ways to be motivated.
First, you can motivate yourself.
OR
>> First, it leads to self-motivation.
As you look for passion, you will be able to study deeply about yourself and find what you like or field.
OR
>> Discovering your passion will allow you to go deeper into self-reflection and identify your interests or areas of expertise.
If you find what you like, you may have a goal to live in or you may want to find a job that suits your field, so a new goal can be set.
OR
>>Once you discover what you enjoy, you can desire to make that a long-term goal or obtain employment in your field, in which case you could make another goal.
Second, it can be a motivation to do the job.
>>Correct
As with the first reason, finding passion can help you focus on getting things done and find ways to get things done better.
OR
>>Just like the first reason, discovering your passion can help you maintain focus, complete tasks, and find more effective ways to execute them.
In another way, you may be interested in collateral compensation and want to do things better.
>>Correct
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