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Share a personality trait that you have acquired through the influence of a friend.

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The biggest influence was from my husband, which is my best friend.
I am kind of living a fast life, and I like things to be planned and I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something I expected.
However, he do something no plan suddenly with a concentration and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
This makes me feel like it is okay even if I don't struggle over things too much, and I could have a more broad-minded personality.

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Hi, Ms. Anna! It sounds like your husband brings a refreshing perspective to your life! It's great that his approach helps you feel more relaxed and broad-minded. Finding that balance can be so valuable.
~T. Jenna

The biggest influence was from my husband, which is my best friend.
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The biggest influence was from my husband, who is my best friend.
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>>My husband, who is also my best friend, has had the greatest impact on me.
I am kind of living a fast life, and I like things to be planned and I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something I expected.
>>I live a fast-paced life, and I prefer things to be planned, so I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something as expected.
OR
>>I lead a fast-paced life and prefer to have everything mapped out, so when things don't go according to plan, it can really throw me off.
However, he do something no plan suddenly with a concentration and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
>>However, he does something unplanned suddenly, with concentration, and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
OR
>>However, he often flies by the seat of his pants, tackling tasks spontaneously with laser focus, and remains cool as a cucumber under pressure.
This makes me feel like it is okay even if I don't struggle over things too much, and I could have a more broad-minded personality.
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>>This makes me feel it's alright not to struggle too much, and it encourages me to cultivate a more broad-minded personality.
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