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Each travel destination has its own charm; however, for me, it's hard to enjoy a trip when I don't feel safe.
During a trip to Bali, I stayed in the Canggu area. There was no public transportation system, so people typically used motorcycles to get around.
I went to a rental bike shop and took a lesson on how to ride a motorcycle. After the short lesson, I nervously started the engine and rode for about 10 minutes. However, when I saw a corner, I wasn't able to turn the handle and ended up in a ditch along with the motorcycle. Despite the delicious food, charming attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don't want to experience an accident like that again. If I visit Bali again, I would stay in another area that is easier to move around!

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Hi, MJ. I guess this story was a very memorable one for you! Thank you for sharing it with me. ^^
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Each travel destination has its own charm; however, for me, it's hard to enjoy a trip when I don't feel safe.
>>CORRECT
During a trip to Bali, I stayed in the Canggu area.
>>During a trip to Bali, I stayed in Canggu.
There was no public transportation system, so people typically used motorcycles to get around.
>>There is no public transportation system there, so people typically use motorcycles to get around.
I went to a rental bike shop and took a lesson on how to ride a motorcycle. 
>>CORRECT
After the short lesson, I nervously started the engine and rode for about 10 minutes.
>>CORRECT
However, when I saw a corner, I wasn't able to turn the handle and ended up in a ditch along with the motorcycle.
>>CORRECT
Despite the delicious food, charming attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don't want to experience an accident like that again.
>>CORRECT
or
>>Despite Bali's delicious food, charming tourist attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don't want to experience an accident like that ever again.
If I visit Bali again, I would stay in another area that is easier to move around!
>CORRECT
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