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Q: What do you think about using a planner?
A: I think it's good if they really do as the planner.
Most people try to make plans and write them on the planner because if they have plans, then things can be done more efficiently.
So definitely, I think planner is good, but only when they do so.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I think it's good if they really do as the planner.
>>I think it's good if they really do what's in the planner.

2. Most people try to make plans and write them on the planner because if they have plans, then things can be done more efficiently.
>>Most people try to make plans and write them in the planner because things can be done more efficiently.

3. So definitely, I think planner is good, but only when they do so.
>>So definitely, I think using a planner is good, but only when they do so.

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