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Could you live without your smartphone (or other technology item) for 24 hours?

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Smartphone is the essential item these days.
I could live without the smartphone; however, it's not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone. For example, I don't remember any phone numbers.

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Smartphone is the essential item these days.
>> 
A smartphone is an essential item these days.

I could live without the smartphone; however, it's not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone.
>> I could live without a smartphone; however, it's not easy because almost all the information I need is on my smartphone. 

For example, I don't remember any phone numbers.
>> CORRECT
OR >>For instance, I can't recall any phone numbers.


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