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Why do you think parasailing is exciting?

작성자: 박*호
2024-06-20 577

회원님의 영작문

People always have desires for what they do not have and what they cannot do.
People have always wanted to fly freely in the sky like birds.
I think parasailing is exciting because it fulfills the human desire to fly like a bird.
Parasailing is relatively safe, but people can also experience the thrill of soaring high into the sky while being pulled by a boat and the experience of freely gliding through the air.
people can also enjoy the blue sea and beautiful beaches that spread out from the high sky beneath their feet.
Additionally, parasailing is usually done by two people, and they can have the unique experience of talking with their loved one while looking down from high in the sky.
I went parasailing with my wife on my honeymoon and I made unforgettable memories and felt like I was a bird.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Sun!

In my opinion, parasailing combines elements of adventure, natural beauty, and a unique perspective that many find exciting and memorable.

- Kristine ^^

People always have desires for what they do not have and what they cannot do.
>> People are inherently driven to desire what they can't obtain or achieve.
People have always wanted to fly freely in the sky like birds.
>> People have always yearned to soar through the skies like birds.
I think parasailing is exciting because it fulfills the human desire to fly like a bird.
>> Correct.
Parasailing is relatively safe, but people can also experience the thrill of soaring high into the sky while being pulled by a boat and the experience of freely gliding through the air.
>> Parasailing is relatively safe, but people can also experience the thrill of soaring high into the sky while being pulled by a boat and gliding through the air.
people can also enjoy the blue sea and beautiful beaches that spread out from the high sky beneath their feet.
>> People can also enjoy the blue sea and beautiful beaches that spread out from the high sky beneath their feet.
Additionally, parasailing is usually done by two people, and they can have the unique experience of talking with their loved one while looking down from high in the sky.
>> Furthermore, parasailing is typically done by two people, who can enjoy a unique chance of conversing with a loved one while hanging high in the sky.
I went parasailing with my wife on my honeymoon and I made unforgettable memories and felt like I was a bird.
>> During my honeymoon, my wife and I went parasailing, and I had an amazing time and felt like a bird.
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