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What is your favorite book of all time?

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From the age, my favorite book has changed. Nowadays I read "Stolen Focus". It talks about how we focus only one in the ocean of information. This book suggests we need to divide what is important or not. It's quite agreeable to me.

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Hello, Ms. Angela! I agree that are favorites change over time. This book sounds interesting. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
From the age, my favorite book has changed. 
>>As my age changes, my favorite book does, too.
Nowadays I read "Stolen Focus". 
>>Nowadays, I am reading the book entitled, 'Stolen Focus'.
It talks about how we focus only one in the ocean of information. 
>>It talks about how we must only focus on a single thing among the ocean of information.
This book suggests we need to divide what is important or not. 
>>This book suggests that we need to separate important things from not.
It's quite agreeable to me.
>>I quite agree with it.
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