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How does surfing spread around the world?

작성자: 박*호
2024-06-19 1001

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Surfing is not a common sport in Korea.
Surfing is known to be popular in regions that are hot all year round, such as Hawaii.
In Korea, surfing is not possible in spring, fall, and winter, and surfing can only be enjoyed in summer.
Surfing became an official sport at the 2020 Tokyo Summer Olympics and is spreading globally.
In Korea, surfing schools were recently opened in the summer, and young people began to learn and enjoy surfing.
I believe that movies are the biggest contributor to the spread of surfing around the world.
The surfing scenes shown in the movie are truly romantic and fantastic, and the surfers are also portrayed beautifully.
Every time I see surfing in a movie, I want to learn to surf and enjoy it too.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Hump day, Sun!

It is mainly because surfing can get you in tune with nature more closely. In addition, mastering this skill can provide numerous benefits for the body, soul, and mind. Surfing at present has become the fastest-growing sport with about 40 million people across the world claiming to surf.

- Kristine ^^ 

Surfing is not a common sport in Korea.
>> Correct. 
Or >> Surfing is not a highly popular sport in Korea. 
Surfing is known to be popular in regions that are hot all year round, such as Hawaii.
>> Surfing is known to be popular in regions that are hot all year, such as Hawaii.
In Korea, surfing is not possible in spring, fall, and winter, and surfing can only be enjoyed in summer.
>> In Korea, surfing is not possible in the spring, fall, or winter, and it can only be enjoyed in the summer.
Surfing became an official sport at the 2020 Tokyo Summer Olympics and is spreading globally.
>> Surfing is becoming more popular worldwide and was made an official sport for the 2020 Tokyo Summer Olympics.
In Korea, surfing schools were recently opened in the summer, and young people began to learn and enjoy surfing.
>> Young people in Korea started learning to surf and enjoying it when surfing schools opened for business this summer.
I believe that movies are the biggest contributor to the spread of surfing around the world.
>> I believe the main reason surfing has become so popular worldwide is because of movies.
The surfing scenes shown in the movie are truly romantic and fantastic, and the surfers are also portrayed beautifully.
>> The movie features some incredibly romantic and amazing surfing scenes, with well-done portrayals of the surfers.
Every time I see surfing in a movie, I want to learn to surf and enjoy it too.
>> I always want to learn how to surf and enjoy it as much as I do when I watch it in a movie.
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