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Korea's greate cultural heritage is Hangul. King Sejong made Hangle 500 years ago. Even if Hangle isn't an international language, I am proud of having Hangul. We can convert Hangul to English, cann't tranlate our emotion perpectly. Korean can share our emotion by our language. It's awesome. Someone said that if we don't have Hangul, Korea would use English. I disagree with that opinion. It never happend. I am sure that Chineses language would became the Korean language. If Korean know how difficult learning chinese language, Hangul is the great cultural heritage.

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Korea's greate cultural heritage is Hangul. 
>> Korea's greatest cultural heritage is Hangul.

King Sejong made Hangle 500 years ago. 
>> King Sejong created Hangul 500 years ago.

Even if Hangle isn't an international language, I am proud of having Hangul. 
>> Even though Hangul isn't an international language, I am proud of it.

We can convert Hangul to English, cann't tranlate our emotion perpectly. 
>> We can convert Hangul to English, but we can't translate our emotions perfectly.

Korean can share our emotion by our language. 
>> Koreans can share their emotions through their language.

It's awesome. 
>> CORRECT

Someone said that if we don't have Hangul, Korea would use English. 
>> Someone said that if we didn't have Hangul, Korea would use English.

I disagree with that opinion. It never happend. 
>> I disagree with that opinion. That would never happen.

I am sure that Chineses language would became the Korean language. 
>> I am sure that Chinese language would have become the Korean language.

If Korean know how difficult learning chinese language, Hangul is the great cultural heritage.
>> If Koreans knew how difficult learning the Chinese language is, they would appreciate Hangul even more as a great cultural heritage.
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