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How to effectively save money for the future?

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Hello, Yun.~
Personally, I struggle to save money. I guess I only invest for short-term satisfaction, while other people save for the future. I find it difficult as well. But I suppose finding a balance between saving and enjoying your wages is important since we don't just live to save money because we don't know what tomorrow holds, we also need to live in the present. 
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First, reduce unnecessary spending.

>>Correct

It's one of the best ways to rasie money effectively.

>> It's one of the best ways to raise money effectively.

The way can help you understand your spending patterns and save money, killing two birds with one stone.

>> This way can help you understand your spending patterns and save money, killing two birds with one stone.

In my case, I have reduced the number of times I drink coffee.

This is because no matter how cheap an ice americano I drink, it costs quite a lot of money if there are multiple times.

By reducing the number of coffees, I'm saving money and taking care of my health.

>>Correct

Second, except for fixed, I save the remaing amount in my account.

>> Second, except for the fixed, I saved the remaining amount in my account.

However, you may use money in an emergency situation, so you need to consider save enough money.

Third, I sign up for a installment savings.

>> Third, I signed up for installment savings.

It's a habit I've been doing since I was working.

It's a pretty big expenditure, but when it expires, it can come back to me with a lot of money.

But, in Korea, interest rates and initial costs vary from bank to bank, so it's recommended to compare and choose a profitable installment savings package.

>>Correct

 


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