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If animals could speak, what do you think they would say to humans?

작성자: 박*호
2024-06-14 389

회원님의 영작문

This question is very interesting and stimulates my imagination.
If animals could speak like humans, they would not say friendly things to humans.
The Hollywood movie “Rise of the Planet of the Apes,” released in 2011, was created based on human imagination.
In the movie, the first thing an ape who was able to talk said in anger to the human who was harassing him was "no."
I felt thrilled when I saw that scene.
If animals could talk, they would say "no" to everything humans do.
Animals will say "no" to the actions of humans destroying their habitats, hunting animals, and confining animals to zoos.
Predators only hunt when they are hungry.
But only humans hunt for fun.
I believe that humans should cherish animals, thinking that the Earth is a place where we live together with animals.
Of course that would be impossible.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Sun!

In my opinion, if animals could talk, it would revolutionize the way we understand and relate to them. We would be able to communicate with them on a much deeper level, gaining insights into their thoughts and feelings that we never could before. This could help us understand how they see the world, and what their needs are.

- Kristine ^^

This question is very interesting and stimulates my imagination.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I find this question to be very interesting and stimulating.
If animals could speak like humans, they would not say friendly things to humans.
>> They wouldn't say nice things to people if animals could talk.
The Hollywood movie “Rise of the Planet of the Apes,” released in 2011, was created based on human imagination.
>> The 2011 Hollywood film "Rise of the Planet of the Apes" was inspired by human imagination.
In the movie, the first thing an ape who was able to talk said in anger to the human who was harassing him was "no."
>> In the movie, an ape with speech ability responded angrily to the human pestering him with the word "no."
I felt thrilled when I saw that scene.
>> Correct. 
If animals could talk, they would say "no" to everything humans do.
>> Correct. 
Animals will say "no" to the actions of humans destroying their habitats, hunting animals, and confining animals to zoos.
>> Animals have the right to object to human activities such as habitat destruction, hunting, and zoo confinement.
Predators only hunt when they are hungry.
>> Correct. 
But only humans hunt for fun.
>> Correct. 
I believe that humans should cherish animals, thinking that the Earth is a place where we live together with animals.
>> Since we coexist with animals on Earth, I think that humans should highly value animals.
Of course that would be impossible.
>> Of course, that would be impossible.

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