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Are beauty standards like in your home country different to the rest of the world? If so, how?

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I think beauty standards in my country is a little different to the rest of the world. I guess some Koreans think artificial things beautiful. For example, many people believe that emphasizing fat under eyes makes them look more beautiful, which seems unatural. I heard that it doesn't considered beautiful in other countries. Also, many people do double eyelid surgery and it sometimes feel artificial but peoples still say it is beautiful. Also for the nose plastic surgery. Maybe they don't think it is really beautiful but they are just afraid to disappoint the person who got surgery.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel 
I think beauty standards in my country is a little different to the rest of the world. 
>> Correct!
OR: I believe that the standards of beauty in my own country differ slightly from those in other countries. 
I guess some Koreans think artificial things beautiful. 
>> Correct!
OR: I guess some Koreans find artificial things attractive.
For example, many people believe that emphasizing fat under eyes makes them look more beautiful, which seems unatural. 
>> Correct!
OR: Many people, for example, believe that emphasizing fat under the eyes makes them look more attractive, which appears unnatural. 
I heard that it doesn't considered beautiful in other countries. 
>> Correct!
OR: I've heard it isn't considered beautiful in other countries. 
Also, many people do double eyelid surgery and it sometimes feel artificial but peoples still say it is beautiful. 
>> Correct!
OR: Also, many people undergo double eyelid surgery, which can feel artificial at times but is still considered beautiful by many. 
Also for the nose plastic surgery. 
>> Correct!
OR: for the plastic surgery on the nose as
Maybe they don't think it is really beautiful but they are just afraid to disappoint the person who got surgery.
>> Correct!
OR: Maybe they don't think it's particularly beautiful, but they're afraid to disappoint the person who had surgery.
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