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Why is it important to take pictures?

작성자: 박*호
2024-06-13 627

회원님의 영작문

Taking photos is very useful both personally and for business purposes.
I write a diary every day.
I like being able to record my daily routine and feelings and recall memories when I read them later.
In addition, I take photos of my daily life whenever possible.
And at the end of every year, I print out the photos and create a photo album to keep them. And I like that I can sometimes take it out and look at it and recall the events of that time.
I think that photos are sometimes more effective in bringing back memories than long written diaries.
When I read a newspaper, I can guess the content of the article just by looking at the photos in the newspaper, even if I don't read the entire article.
These days, photos are really helpful in corporate work.
When I want to check what happened on site, I can more easily understand the contents of the report by looking at the attached photos.
These days, I think it's impossible to imagine daily life without photography in many ways.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Sun!

By having your photo taken, you create tangible memories that can transport you back to special moments of joy, love, and togetherness. Looking at these photographs in the future allows you to relive those significant occasions and cherish the memories that might have faded over time.

- Kristine ^^

Taking photos is very useful both personally and for business purposes.
>> Correct. 
I write a diary every day.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I write a daily journal.
I like being able to record my daily routine and feelings and recall memories when I read them later.
>> I enjoy writing down my daily activities, emotions, and memories so that I can look back on them later.
In addition, I take photos of my daily life whenever possible.
>> In addition, I try to document my everyday life with photos whenever I can.
And at the end of every year, I print out the photos and create a photo album to keep them. 
>> Correct. 
And I like that I can sometimes take it out and look at it and recall the events of that time.
>> I also enjoy the fact that I can occasionally pull it out, look at it, and remember what happened at that time.
I think that photos are sometimes more effective in bringing back memories than long written diaries.
>> In my opinion, pictures can sometimes awaken memories more vividly than lengthy written diaries.
When I read a newspaper, I can guess the content of the article just by looking at the photos in the newspaper, even if I don't read the entire article.
>> Even if I don't read the complete text, I can figure out the main points of the news article just by glancing at the pictures.
These days, photos are really helpful in corporate work.
>> Photographs are incredibly useful in corporate work these days.
When I want to check what happened on site, I can more easily understand the contents of the report by looking at the attached photos.
>> I can better grasp the contents of the report by referring to the attached images when I want to investigate what happened on site.
These days, I think it's impossible to imagine daily life without photography in many ways.
>> I believe that in many ways, it is hard to imagine modern life without photography.
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