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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive

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I agree that the tendency of news reports prioritize problems and emergencies over positive developments can be harmful to individuals and society. Firstly, constant exposure to negative news can distort our perception of the world, making it seem more dangerous than it actually is. This can cause increases anxiety, stress and a sense of helplessness among individuals. Secondly, Focusing solely on problems can overlook the progress and positive developments in favor of sensationalist and negative stories happening in society. It might creates a sense of hopelessness and discouraging people from taking action or contributing to positive change. Lastly, It can influence individuals' decision making processes, making them more risk averse and less likely to take chances or pursue opportunities. In conclusion, while the tendency of news reports to focus on problems and emergencies can have negative consequences. It is crucial to recognize the valuable role that the media plays in informing

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Hi there MR. HWANG~!^^ It's truly impressive to observe your unwavering passion and dedication in finishing your written assignments! Keep refining your vocabulary prowess even further.
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I agree that the tendency of news reports prioritize problems and emergencies over positive developments can be harmful to individuals and society. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Firstly, constant exposure to negative news can distort our perception of the world, making it seem more dangerous than it actually is.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 This can cause increases anxiety, stress and a sense of helplessness among individuals. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Secondly, focusing solely on problems can overlook the progress and positive developments in favor of sensationalist and negative stories happening in society.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 It might create a sense of hopelessness and discouraging people from taking action or contributing to positive change.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 Lastly, it can influence individuals' decision making processes, making them more risk averse and less likely to take chances or pursue opportunities. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
In conclusion, while the tendency of news reports to focus on problems and emergencies can have negative consequences. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It is crucial to recognize the valuable role that the media plays in informing. . .
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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