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Q : When are you most productive?
A : I am productive from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m. In the afternoon, it becomes loose after lunch.

Q : Do you always do what you have to?
A : If this question is about work, I have to work all the time, because if I stay home without working, I become lazy.

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Hello, Steve! You seem to have a good routine in the morning! It's common for energy levels to dip in the afternoon, especially after lunch. And it's understandable to feel the need to keep busy to avoid feeling lazy. Finding a balance between productivity and rest is key. 
~ Teacher Maxine 

I am productive from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m. 
>> I am productive from 9 a.m. to 12 p.m.

In the afternoon, it becomes loose after lunch.
>> CORRECT

If this question is about work, I have to work all the time, because if I stay home without working, I become lazy.
>> CORRECT
OR >> If this question is about work, I feel the need to work all the time because if I stay home without working, I become lazy.
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