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Even with the same topic, each person sees it from a different perspective and each has a different important part of the topic.
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Hi Da Hye,

You've beautifully highlighted the diversity of perspectives in your homework. It's fascinating how our environments and personalities shape our views. Keep exploring these ideas-it's a key to understanding and appreciating others better. Great job!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Even with the same topic, each person sees it from a different perspective and each has a different important part of the topic.

>>CORRECT

OR>> Even when discussing the same topic, everyone looks at it in their own way and thinks different parts of it are important.

That's why people can have different opinions on the same topic.

>>CORRECT

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