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Q: What are some advantages of going on vacation with friends?
A: I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is the joy will be doubled.
Usually people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang with.
Also, they can count on each other when they have trouble during the vacation or trip.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina

Take note of the following considerations:

1. I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is the joy will be doubled.
>>I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is that the joy will be doubled.

2. Usually people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang with.
>>Usually, people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang out with.

3. Also, they can count on each other when they have trouble during the vacation or trip.
>>CORRECT!

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