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Raising animals for food contributes to air and water pollution.

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l agree this statement to some extent, but I cannot come up with how they pollute environment.
I also assum that, leaving the animals aside, raising something Including human being all contributes to air and water pollution.
Probably raising plants could be excluded.
How much it contributes to pollution may be more important than it does or does not contribute to pollution.

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Hi, Ms. Anna! You're correct in noting that raising animals and even human activities can contribute to pollution through various means like greenhouse gas emissions and waste production. Nevertheless, while raising plants may have a comparatively lower impact, it's crucial to consider factors like pesticide use and land management practices to understand the full extent of environmental impact.
~T. Jenna

l agree this statement to some extent, but I cannot come up with how they pollute environment.
>>I agree with this statement to some extent, but I cannot come up with how they pollute the environment.
I also assum that, leaving the animals aside, raising something Including human being all contributes to air and water pollution.
>> I also assume that, leaving animals aside, raising anything, including human beings, contributes to air and water pollution.
Probably raising plants could be excluded.
Correct, or
>> It's possible that we may choose not to consider the cultivation of plants with regard to thsi matter.
How much it contributes to pollution may be more important than it does or does not contribute to pollution.
>>How much it contributes to pollution may be more important than whether it does or does not contribute to pollution.
OR
>> The extent of its contribution to pollution may be more important than whether or not it contributes to pollution.
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