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Which part of your country's history is your favorite? Why?
>>> My favorite part of my country's history is King sejong's invention of hangeul. Hangeul is korean alphabet which was invented in 1444. King sejong was a king who loved the common people and also natural genius. This combination had achived a lot of things in our history. Best of the things he achived is no doubt invention of hangeul. Hangeul is appreciated for its superiority in the world. The most of people who can speak korean appraise its simplicity. I'm so proud of hangeul.

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Hello, Brian!
That's really fascinating! King Sejong's invention of Hangeul sounds like such a pivotal moment in your country's history. It's incredible how something created centuries ago still has such a profound impact today. I can understand why you're proud of Hangeul; it's not just a writing system but a symbol of cultural identity and innovation. Thank you for sharing this insight with me! ^^
~ Teacher Maxine

My favorite part of my country's history is King sejong's invention of hangeul. 
>> My favorite part of my country's history is King Sejong's invention of Hangeul.

Hangeul is korean alphabet which was invented in 1444. 
>>  Hangeul is the Korean alphabet, which was invented in 1444.

King sejong was a king who loved the common people and also natural genius. 
>>  King Sejong was a monarch who loved the common people and was also a natural genius.

This combination had achived a lot of things in our history. 
>>  This combination achieved many things in our history.

Best of the things he achived is no doubt invention of hangeul. 
>>  The best of his achievements is undoubtedly the invention of Hangeul.

Hangeul is appreciated for its superiority in the world. 
>>  Hangeul is appreciated for its superiority in the world.

The most of people who can speak korean appraise its simplicity. I'm so proud of hangeul.
>> Most people who can speak Korean praise its simplicity. I'm so proud of Hangeul.
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