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Q : Who always provides the things you need?
A : I buy or get what I need. It's rare that someone offers me something.

Q : What are the things you provide for your loved ones?
A : I have delicious food and a good time with my loved one.

Another question.

- Are you asking me to give you an answer related to the above exercise sentence? Or are you telling me to do it freely?
(Is this the right sentence?)

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Hello, Steve! It's the right sentence. :)
~ Teacher Maxine 

I buy or get what I need. It's rare that someone offers me something.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I buy or acquire what I need. It's rare for someone to offer me something.

I have delicious food and a good time with my loved one.
>> I enjoy delicious food and good times with my loved ones.
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