¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

homework 06.07

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÃÖ*Ç
2024-06-07 738

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some challenges of living in a country with a different culture?

I think the when living in abroad, the biggest different are culture and language.
The closet abroad countries to Korea are Japan and China.
They and my country's people similar in appearance, but there are differences culture, language, food.
And in case of the western countries, there many differences compared to the Asian countries.
That's why many people say, it's never easy to live in a foreign country.
I think, if I have a chance, it will be a new experience to live in a foreign country.
I like adventure(challenge) more than normal people.
So I sometimes make unusual decisions, but I think this challenge will have a positive impact on me.


Have a great weekend! ~ Camille teacher !
Thank you always!

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille



~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some challenges of living in a country with a different culture?


I think the when living in abroad, the biggest different are culture and language.
>> I think when living in abroad, the biggest differences are culture and language.
The closet abroad countries to Korea are Japan and China.
>> The closest countries to Korea are Japan and China.
They and my country's people similar in appearance, but there are differences culture, language, food.
>> They and my country's people are similar in appearances, but there are differences in culture, language, food.
And in case of the western countries, there many differences compared to the Asian countries.
>> CORRECT!
That's why many people say, it's never easy to live in a foreign country.
>> CORRECT!
I think, if I have a chance, it will be a new experience to live in a foreign country.
>> CORRECT!
I like adventures (challenge) more than normal people.
>> CORRECT!
So I sometimes make unusual decisions, but I think this challenge will have a positive impact on me.
>> CORRECT!

Have a great weekend! ~ Camille teacher !
Thank you always!    [ You're welcome Keon! ~ T. Camille ]
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
140747 How did you overcome hour sleep paralysis? ±Ç*Áö ¿Ï·á 2024-11-01 1
140746 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 1
140745 Homework ¾ç*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 220
140744 What\'s the best thing about your childhood?Explain. Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 194
140743 Would you have a part-time job in the future to get extra money... ¿À*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 234
140742 Home work ½Å*¶ó ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 223
140741 What do you add when you make egg salad? What kind of salad... ÀÌ*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 233
140740 What kind of hobbies do you want to start? Why? ÇÑ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 234
140739 How important do you think appearance is in daily life? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 1
140738 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 236
140737 Why are the ambition important? ÃÖ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 214
140736 How can a smile communicate feelings or intentions without... ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 245
140735 What are the disadvantages of booking a flight one year in... ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 228
140734 What are the advantages of being an early riser? ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 241
140733 What are the advantages of booking flights online? ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 245
140732 October,18 ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 224
140731 What is a place from your childhood that holds a lot of memories... ÀÌ*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 8
140730 30Oct2024_home work ±è*¶ó ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 242
140729 You have enough money to purchase either a house or a busineess.... ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 182
140728 Homework Àå*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-10-31 236

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04