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I say yes because consideration is good behavior

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Hello Keon Min,

Great job on your homework! Saying "yes" and being considerate is very good behavior. It shows that you care about others. Keep up the good work and always try to be kind and considerate. See you later! ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

I say yes because consideration is good behavior

>>Consideration is good behavior.

 

 

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