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Have you ever seen a piece of art that affected you strongly? What was it?

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I don't have much knowledge about art.
However, I can't forget the shock I had from Picasso's paintings that I saw in art class when I was in school.
My first impression was that it looked like something children had roughly scribbled.
I even thought the pictures were something I stopped drawing.
It was not as elegant or nice as other famous painters' paintings.
However, after hearing a detailed story about Picasso from my art teacher, my thoughts changed.
When Picasso was very young, he was already the best at drawing in general at the time.
It is said that he became tired of such drawings and began to draw his own unique and creative paintings.
But it is said that people at the time criticized Picasso's work harshly.
And it is said that only after a long time had passed did Picasso's paintings become internationally recognized.
It is easy to imitate others, but it is difficult to create your own unique painting style.
That is why Picasso is evaluated as a great painter.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Sun!

Learning through and about the arts enriches the experience of studying while at school as well as preparing students for life after school. Arts subjects encourage self-expression and creativity and can build confidence as well as a sense of individual identity.

- Kristine ^^ 

I don't have much knowledge about art.
>> Correct.
However, I can't forget the shock I had from Picasso's paintings that I saw in art class when I was in school.
>> However I'll never forget the surprise that I experienced upon seeing Picasso's works in art class when I was a student.
My first impression was that it looked like something children had roughly scribbled.
>> Correct.
Or >> Upon first glance, it appeared to be a rough sketch made by toddlers.
I even thought the pictures were something I stopped drawing.
>> I even thought that the drawings were something I no longer wanted to draw.
It was not as elegant or nice as other famous painters' paintings.
>> Correct.
Or >> It was not as sophisticated or exquisite as the works of other well-known painters.
However, after hearing a detailed story about Picasso from my art teacher, my thoughts changed.
>> However my thoughts were changed when my art teacher told me a thorough biography of Picasso.
When Picasso was very young, he was already the best at drawing in general at the time.
>> Correct.
It is said that he became tired of such drawings and began to draw his own unique and creative paintings.
>> It is stated that he grew weary of these illustrations and started creating his own original paintings.
But it is said that people at the time criticized Picasso's work harshly.
>> Unfortunately it's claimed that Picasso's artwork was heavily criticized.
And it is said that only after a long time had passed did Picasso's paintings become internationally recognized.
>> It's also claimed that Picasso's paintings didn't gain widespread recognition until after quite a while had gone by.
It is easy to imitate others, but it is difficult to create your own unique painting style.
>> Correct.
That is why Picasso is evaluated as a great painter.
>> Picasso is considered as a great painter because of this.
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