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What is the impression you want your audience to take away from your speech?

작성자: 박*호
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회원님의 영작문

I have participated in many speeches as an audience member and have received many impressions from them.
There were times when it was a powerful memory that I would never forget, and there were times when I felt a sense of disappointment that it was a waste of time.
Because the audience takes time out of their busy schedules to participate, they will hope to get what they want.
The first impression I want the audience to get from my speech is the speaker's confidence. I believe that a speaker's self-confidence increases the audience's trust in the speech and increases immersion.
Next, I want the audience to get the impression that I am an excellent expert on the topic of my speech.
And I hope the audience can feel my strong passion that does not tire me out throughout the speech.
And lastly, I want to be impressed that my public speaking skills are also excellent.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you, Sun! 

Making a strong first impression helps you grab your audience's attention and keep them interested all throughout your presentation. Plus, it helps build your credibility as a speaker. Always remember that first impressions last, so make yours count.

- Kristine ^^ 


I have participated in many speeches as an audience member and have received many impressions from them.
>> As a part of the audience,I have attended many speeches and have learned a lot from them.
There were times when it was a powerful memory that I would never forget, and there were times when I felt a sense of disappointment that it was a waste of time.
>> There were moments when it was an unforgettable experience that I would never let go of, and there were other moments when I felt let down that it was a waste of time.
Because the audience takes time out of their busy schedules to participate, they will hope to get what they want.
>> The audience will be hoping to receive what they want since they are willing to take part despite their busy schedules.
The first impression I want the audience to get from my speech is the speaker's confidence. I believe that a speaker's self-confidence increases the audience's trust in the speech and increases immersion.
>> I want my speech to leave the listener with the feeling that the speaker is confident. I think that self-assurance in a speaker boosts immersion and the audience's faith in the discourse.
Next, I want the audience to get the impression that I am an excellent expert on the topic of my speech.
>> Next, I want the audience to believe that I am a highly knowledgeable expert on the subject matter of my speech.
And I hope the audience can feel my strong passion that does not tire me out throughout the speech.
>> Additionally, I hope the audience can sense my deep feelings, which keeps me from becoming weary during the speech.
And lastly, I want to be impressed that my public speaking skills are also excellent.
>> Lastly, I would like to impress you with my outstanding public speaking abilities.
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