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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Is it important to learn "slang words" in English? Why or why not?

When I first time heard the "slang word", it was interesting.
This is because English also used comfortably in daily life just like Korean.
So I think it's good to learn slang expressions that popular word.
Nevertheless, on the other hand, I think I should be careful when using the slang word.
There are many kinds of language style.
For example, there are formal word, word used with friends, and swear word.
Except for a few common slang words, a few slang words included swear word.
And some times among the these kinds of slang words contain the meaning of racism.
So before the speak slang words, it's important to know the meaning.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Is it important to learn "slang words" in English? Why or why not?


When I first time heard the "slang word", it was interesting.
>> When I first heard the "slang word", it was interesting.
This is because English also used comfortably in daily life just like Korean.
>> This is because English is also used comfortably in daily life just like Korean.
So I think it's good to learn slang expressions that popular word.
>> So I think it's good to learn slang expressions that are popular.
Nevertheless, on the other hand, I think I should be careful when using the slang word.
>> On the other hand, I think I should be careful when using slang words.
There are many kinds of language style.
>> There are many language styles.
For example, there are formal word, word used with friends, and swear word.
>> For example, there are formal words, words used with friends, and swear words.
Except for a few common slang words, a few slang words include swear words.
>> CORRECT!
And sometimes among the these kinds of slang words contain the meaning of racism.
>> And sometimes among these kinds of slang words, it contains racist expressions.
So before the speak slang words, it's important to know the meaning.
>> So before speaking slang words, it's important to know the meaning.
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