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Do you think fancy restaurants serve more delicious food than regular restaurants? Why or why not?

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2024-06-05 1615

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I think fancy restaurants don't serve more delicious food than regular restaurants.
Because there are lots of delicious regular restaurants despite fancy restaurants having famous chefs.
Tasty looks complicated but it is simple, so if the flavor suits me then I feel it's tasty.
For example, when water and soy sauce are properly added, it can be a very tasty soy soup.
Most very popular restaurants have only one menu and the price is reasonable.
Concentrating on one menu makes the best food, but fancy restaurants have too many menus and the price is too high.

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Happy Thursday, MK!
I really admire your writing skills in English. You can create grammatically correct sentences, and you expressed your opinion on our topic very well. Keep it up!
- T. Caitlyn
I think fancy restaurants don't serve more delicious food than regular restaurants.
>> CORRECT
Because there are lots of delicious regular restaurants despite fancy restaurants having famous chefs.
>> CORRECT
Tasty looks complicated but it is simple, so if the flavor suits me then I feel it's tasty.
>> CORRECT
For example, when water and soy sauce are properly added, it can be a very tasty soy soup.
>> CORRECT
Most very popular restaurants have only one menu and the price is reasonable.
>> CORRECT
Concentrating on one menu makes the best food, but fancy restaurants have too many menus and the price is too high.
>> CORRECT
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