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¡°Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.¡± What do you think this means? Do you agree with it?

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¡°Beauty is in the eye of the beholder¡± means that the perception of beauty is subjective and varies from person to person.
I absolutely agree with this.
What some people think is beautiful, others may not.
There is no universal standard for beauty, and it is influenced by individual tastes, cultural differences, and personal experiences.
Nowadays, because Western culture has spread and become dominant around the world, there is a tendency to view beauty standards from a Western perspective.
However, I don't think this is desirable.
All humans, whether from Europe or Africa, are equal and beautiful.
And everyone has the right to be respected and loved, whether they are from a developed country or an underdeveloped country.

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¡°Beauty is in the eye of the beholder¡± means that the perception of beauty is subjective and varies from person to person.
>> Correct.
I absolutely agree with this.
>> Correct.
What some people think is beautiful, others may not.
>> What may be considered attractive by some may not be by others.
There is no universal standard for beauty, and it is influenced by individual tastes, cultural differences, and personal experiences.
>> A person's perception of beauty is shaped by their own preferences, cultural background, and life events; therefore there is no universal standard for beauty. 
Nowadays, because Western culture has spread and become dominant around the world, there is a tendency to view beauty standards from a Western perspective.
>> These days, there is a trend to see beauty standards through a Western perspective due to the growth and globalization of Western culture.
However, I don't think this is desirable.
>> Correct.
All humans, whether from Europe or Africa, are equal and beautiful.
>> No matter where they are from—Africa or Europe—all people are equal and stunning.
And everyone has the right to be respected and loved, whether they are from a developed country or an underdeveloped country.
>> In addition regardless of their nationality—developed or developing—everyone has the right to love and respect.
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