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What is one thing you have never done but would like to do?

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I want to travel abroad that is not full of Koreans. The only forein land that I've visited was Saipan. But there were so many Koreans and our schedule was too heavy so it was hard to experience the exotic mood. I want traveling for new experiences, environment and rest but my.experience in Saipan was not that satisfying. There were a variety of activities I can do there, but I didn't rest and it felt like I was in Korea.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel 
I want to travel abroad that is not full of Koreans. 
>> Correct!
OR: I'd like to travel abroad where there aren't many Koreans.
The only forein land that I've visited was Saipan. 
>> The only foreign land that I've visited was Saipan. 
OR: Saipan was the only foreign land I'd visited. 
But there were so many Koreans and our schedule was too heavy so it was hard to experience the exotic mood. 
>> Correct!
OR: However, there were so many Koreans and our schedule was too full, making it difficult to experience the exotic mood. 
I want traveling for new experiences, environment and rest but my.experience in Saipan was not that satisfying. 
>> I enjoy traveling for new experiences, scenery, and relaxation, but my time in Saipan was not particularly enjoyable. 
There were a variety of activities I can do there, but I didn't rest and it felt like I was in Korea.
>> Correct!
OR: There were a variety of activities available, but I did not rest and felt as if I were in Korea.
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