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Do you think being punctual is important? Why or why not?

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Keeping the time is important especially in the business.
We have many appointment. so sometimes we need to attend next appointment after previous appointment immediately.
In this situation, if someone is late, we feel angry.

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Hey JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion on why it's important to be punctual. I think it's important to respect other people's time so we always have to be punctual.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Keeping the time is important especially in the business.
>>Keeping time is important, especially in business. 
We have many appointment. so sometimes we need to attend next appointment after previous appointment immediately.
>>We have many appointments, so sometimes we need to attend the next appointment immediately after the previous one. 
In this situation, if someone is late, we feel angry.
>>In this situation, if someone is late, it makes us feel angry.
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