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Are there any plants that people think bring bad luck in your culture?

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2024-06-04 972

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In Korea, flowers are given as gifts for various events according to the language of flowers.
On the other hand, I don't think much meaning was attached to plants.
However, after searching for related information on the Internet, I learned that older people still believe that certain plants bring bad luck, and that they try to keep such plants out of their homes as much as possible.
A representative example is Lawsonia.
It is believed that having Lawsonia in the house reduces the positive energy in the house and increases fights between the people living there.
Next is Acacia.
The thorny acacia is said to cause strife among people due to its association with conflict and hostility.
And dried flowers are also viewed negatively. Having dried flowers in the home is known to be negative because it has the potential to cause disease and poverty.
Above, we introduced several plants that are believed to bring bad luck, but these days, Koreans tend not to pay much attention to them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Sun! 


I heard Tamarind, Bonsai, Cotton Plants, Dead Plants and Weeping Figs are some bad luck plants in Feng Shui that should not be placed in the home.

- Kristine ^^ 

In Korea, flowers are given as gifts for various events according to the language of flowers.
>> Correct.
On the other hand, I don't think much meaning was attached to plants.
>> However, I don't believe that plants had any significance.
However, after searching for related information on the Internet, I learned that older people still believe that certain plants bring bad luck, and that they try to keep such plants out of their homes as much as possible.
>> I've discovered that older people still think that some plants bring bad luck and make every effort to keep such plants out of their houses after looking up relevant information online.
A representative example is Lawsonia.
>> Correct. 
It is believed that having Lawsonia in the house reduces the positive energy in the house and increases fights between the people living there.
>> It is believed that having Lawsonia around diminishes the pleasant vibe and increases arguments amongst residents.
Next is Acacia.
>> Correct. 
The thorny acacia is said to cause strife among people due to its association with conflict and hostility.
>> People say that the thorny acacia causes disagreement since it is associated with hatred and strife.
And dried flowers are also viewed negatively.
 >> Additionally, dried flowers are also viewed negatively
Having dried flowers in the home is known to be negative because it has the potential to cause disease and poverty.
>> It is well recognized that having dried flowers around the house can lead to illness and poverty.
Above, we introduced several plants that are believed to bring bad luck, but these days, Koreans tend not to pay much attention to them.
>> Above, we introduced several plants that are believed to bring bad luck, but these days, Koreans tend not to pay much attention to them.

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