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First time in my company, I was very nervous. Because I didn't know about my poosition. And I've never used Excel before. Fortunately, my superior treated me comfortable and taught me kindly. I could learn and adapt slowly. It wasn't hard day for me so, I can't remember in detail. The way back home was quite hard work. I had to transfer to the subway twice in rush hour. There was no seat for me Because really crowded. That was only thing that was hard for me.

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Hi,

Thanks for sharing about your first day. I agree, it truly is nerve-wracking on our first day of work but we get through it each day. ^^ 


-Teacher Ash

First time in my company, I was very nervous.

>> I was very nervous on my first day at the company. 


 Because I didn't know about my poosition. 

>>It¡¯s because I did not know my role in the company. 


And I've never used Excel before.

>> I also never used Excel before. 


 Fortunately, my superior treated me comfortable and taught me kindly.

>> Fortunately, my superior treated me well as she trained me. 


 I could learn and adapt slowly. 

>> I was able to learn and adapt slowly. 


It wasn't hard day for me so, I can't remember in detail. 

>>It was not a very difficult day for me so, I can¡¯t remember the detail. 


The way back home was quite hard work.

>>The way back home was quite hard.


 I had to transfer to the subway twice in rush hour. 

>> I had to transfer to the subway twice during rush hour. 


There was no seat for me Because really crowded.

>> There was no seat for me because it was really crowded.


 That was only thing that was hard for me.

>> That was the only thing that was hard for me.


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