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Writing Task: How do you spend your time when you are on holiday and the weather is bad?

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When the weather is bad, I spend most of my time at home. I play games, study, or watch movies. I usually watch animation or comedy movies, which help me overcome my depressive mood caused by rain

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Hello, Sangdo! I think, those are the best ways to brighten up oneself during a bad weather. And, I agree that there really is something in the rain that makes one more sentimental. I wish you will only have happy days!
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When the weather is bad, I spend most of my time at home. 
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OR. When the weather is bad, I usually stay home.
I play games, study, or watch movies. 
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OR. Playing games, studying, or watching movies are some of the things I do.
I usually watch animation or comedy movies, which help me overcome my depressive mood caused by rain
>>I usually watch animation or comedy movies to help me overcome the depressing mood I feel caused by rain.
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