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Q: What school protocols do you not like?

A: My school protocols is very free so not discontent but other schools have rule not wear gym clothes other times clothes of P.E class.
Many Korean school wear school uniforms. This is very uncomfortable. I hope rule change a lot of students wear gym clothes a freely.

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Hi Yeong Min!
Same thought here. When I was a student, one of the protocols that I hated so much is wearing school uniforms. Here in the Phiippines, the moment you step in school from preschool to high school, we are required to wear those. 
Well, they are rules and we only need to follow the,.
T. Aki~

My school protocols is very free so not discontent but other schools have rule not wear gym clothes other times clothes of P.E class.
>>>  My school's protocols are quite relaxed, which I appreciate. However, I've noticed that in other schools, there are rules against wearing gym clothes or clothes from physical education (P.E.) class at other times.

Many Korean school wear school uniforms.  This is very uncomfortable.
>>> Many Korean schools also require students to wear uniforms, which can be uncomfortable. 

 I hope rule change a lot of students wear gym clothes a freely.
>>> I hope the rules can be adjusted so that students can wear gym clothes more freely

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