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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do people do during a housewarming party?

I think we have a lot of special events when we do a housewarming party in our country.
When we have a housewarming party, we invite guests and enjoy the party.
At this time, almost guests give small gifts, paper tissues, and detergents.
The common of meaning of these gifts has to stay clean, healthy in new home.
And paper tissues gift means that giver is wishing the continued success and good health.
Just easily the unravels from the roll.
And then there is we say "Go-Sa", a type of superstition in my country.
Usually, before we do a big business or we pray when we buy something very expensive and when we buy a vehicle.
This is because pray for safety and health and for remove the misfortune.
It's the same when we moved home.
Usually many Korean do pray for our good luck to ask our house ghost.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do people do during a housewarming party?


I think we have a lot of special events when we do a housewarming party in our country.
>> CORRECT!
When we have a housewarming party, we invite guests and enjoy the party.
>> CORRECT!
At this time, almost guests give small gifts, paper tissues, and detergents.
>> At this time, most guests give small gifts, tissue papers, and detergents.
The common of meaning of these gifts has to stay clean, healthy in new home.
>> The meaning of these common gifts is to stay clean and healthy in their new home.
And paper tissues gift means that giver is wishing the continued success and good health.
>> Tissue papers mean that the giver is wishing for continued success and good health.
Just easily the unravels from the roll.
>> That's because it easily unravels from the roll.
And then there is we say "Go-Sa", a type of superstition in my country.
>> We also say "Go-Sa", a type of superstition in my country.
Usually, before we do a big business or we pray when we buy something very expensive and when we buy a vehicle.
>> We usually say it before we do a big business, or we pray when we buy something very expensive like buying a vehicle.
This is because pray for safety and health and for remove the misfortune.
>> This is because we pray for safety, good health, fortune.
It's the same when we moved home.
>> It's the same when we move to a new home.
Usually many Koreans do pray for good luck to ask our house ghost.
>> CORRECT!

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