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What annoys you most about other people¡¯s behaviour in parks?

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Since the park is a public facility used by many people, you must follow the usage rules and do not inconvenience others.
Unlike in the past, there are no longer people drinking and singing loudly in the park.
There are still acts that make people resting in the park uncomfortable.
A representative example is pet waste.
Most people dispose of their pet waste immediately, but there are still rare people who do not clean up their pet waste.
In Korea, fines are imposed in these cases, but I believe pet owners should dispose of their pet waste on their own regardless of the fine.
And people who leave without cleaning the place they stayed also annoy me.
Also, although it mostly happens in the evening, a few couples who engage in over-the-top affectionate behavior at the park embarrass those who come to the park with their children.

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Happy Thursday, Sun! 

Thank you so much for doing your homework today! 

- Kristine ^^ 

Since the park is a public facility used by many people, you must follow the usage rules and do not inconvenience others.
>> You must abide by the rules and guidelines and be considerate of others as the park is a public space that is visited by a large number of people.
Unlike in the past, there are no longer people drinking and singing loudly in the park.
>> Correct. 
There are still acts that make people resting in the park uncomfortable.
>> There are still certain behaviors that are difficult for people to relax in parks.
A representative example is pet waste.
>> Pet waste serves as an exemplary case.
Most people dispose of their pet waste immediately, but there are still rare people who do not clean up their pet waste.
>> Pet waste is usually disposed of right away, however some people still choose not to clean up after their pets.
In Korea, fines are imposed in these cases, but I believe pet owners should dispose of their pet waste on their own regardless of the fine.
>> In Korea, pet owners who fail to dispose of their waste properly may face fines; nonetheless, in my opinion, pet owners should be responsible for disposing of their own waste.
And people who leave without cleaning the place they stayed also annoy me.
>> I also get annoyed by those who leave a place without cleaning it.
Also, although it mostly happens in the evening, a few couples who engage in over-the-top affectionate behavior at the park embarrass those who come to the park with their children.
>> Also, although it mostly happens in the evening, a few couples who engage in over-the-top affectionate behavior at the park embarrass those who come to the park with their children.

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