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Q : What is the best thing about your birthplace?
A : I was born in jinju, a local city in Korea.
I think i lived there until i was 33 years old and i was satisfied.
There are many universities and many people enjoy cultural facilities, so many young people stay here.
It's called the City of Teaching, and the city is formed around the river, so view is nice.
If you have a chance to come to korea, I recommend you to visit this place.


Q : How is our accent affected by our birthplace?
A : Dialects are being used, but there is no problem with communication.

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Hello, Steve!
That sounds wonderful! It must have been a great experience living in such a vibrant and culturally rich place. Thank you for the recommendation!
~ Teacher Maxine

I think i lived there until i was 33 years old and i was satisfied.
>> I think I lived there until I was 33 years old, and I was satisfied.

There are many universities and many people enjoy cultural facilities, so many young people stay here.
>> There are many universities, and many people enjoy the cultural facilities, so many young people stay here.

It's called the City of Teaching, and the city is formed around the river, so view is nice.
>> It's called the City of Teaching, and the city is formed around the river, so the view is nice.

If you have a chance to come to korea, I recommend you to visit this place.
>> If you have a chance to come to Korea, I recommend you visit this place.

Dialects are being used, but there is no problem with communication.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Dialects are used, but there is no problem with communication.

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