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What are some challenges faced by historical relics and artifacts in your country?

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Most of our historical relics are made by nature-friendly.
But historical place also changed rapidly.
So i think it is very harmful for that place.

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Good day, Dan!
Nature has provided us with natural scenery which we are supposed to enjoy but these days, people are abusing their powers by taking and scratching off what nature has given us. A sad reality.
Aki~

Most of our historical relics are made by nature-friendly.
>>> Most of our historical relics were made by nature.

But historical place also changed rapidly.
>>> But historical places also changed rapidly.

So i think it is very harmful for that place.
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >>  I believe it's quite detrimental to that location
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