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What is the best fishing method for beginners? Why?
>> The first step is setting the mind. Beginners must think that they might not catch a fish because many beginners anticipate jackpot after beginners\' luck at first time. there isn't a easy thing in the world. The role of beginners\' luck is induce fun and passion for fishing and doesn\'t indicate that you\'re talented. Many idiot beginners\' lose their fun easily. But they must endure that period. I think a goot mindset and just passion are great methods for beginners. If they get them, letting things run their course leads good result finally.

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Hello, Brian!
Thank you for sharing your insights! I agree that having the right mindset and passion are crucial for beginners. It's important to understand that success often requires patience and perseverance, especially in activities like fishing. I'll keep your advice in mind as I continue to learn. ^^ Thanks again! :)
~ Teacher Maxine

The first step is setting the mind. 
>> CORRECT

Beginners must think that they might not catch a fish because many beginners anticipate jackpot after beginners\' luck at first time. 
>> Beginners must understand that they might not catch a fish because many anticipate a jackpot after beginner's luck the first time.

there isn't a easy thing in the world. 
>> There isn't an easy thing in the world.

The role of beginners\' luck is induce fun and passion for fishing and doesn\'t indicate that you\'re talented. 
>> The role of beginner's luck is to induce fun and passion for fishing and doesn't indicate that you're talented.

Many idiot beginners\' lose their fun easily. But they must endure that period. 
>> Many inexperienced beginners lose their fun easily. But they must endure that period.

I think a goot mindset and just passion are great methods for beginners. 
>> I think a good mindset and pure passion are great methods for beginners.

If they get them, letting things run their course leads good result finally.
>> If they achieve them, letting things run their course leads to good results finally.

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