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Q: If your friend cooked something for you and it tasted bad, what would you say?
A: I think I'll say it's not bad, and give him a feedback.
If I say it's bad, then my friend might get hurt, so I won't say it's bad, but he should know what's wrong, so I'll give him a feedback.
But if I'm really close with my friend who cooked, I'll say it's bad but not very seriously.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework question.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think I'll say it's not bad, and give him a feedback.
>>I think I'd say it's not bad and give him feedback.

2. If I say it's bad, then my friend might get hurt, so I won't say it's bad, but he should know what's wrong, so I'll give him a feedback.
>>If I say it's bad, my friend might get hurt, so I won't say that it's bad. I'd give him feedback instead so that he would know what to improve.

3. But if I'm really close with my friend who cooked, I'll say it's bad but not very seriously.
>>But if I'm really close with my friend who cooked, I'd say it's bad but not very seriously.

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