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회원님의 영작문

1.Hello,my name is Ethan and I'm 7 years old.
2.Today,I want to talk about the importance
of trees.
3.Trees are beautiful.
4.The brown wood and the green leaves are
Pleasing to the eyes.
5.A garden full of trees in bloom is lovely
Sight too.
6.They provide birds a home and shelter.
7.Trees give us fruits.
8.It gives us shade.
9.Above all it gives us much need air.
10.But today because of man's greed trees are
being cut down I'm large numbers.
11.Yet there were a time people used to gather together under large trees
12.They met,they talked,they made friends with
each other.
13.But those good old days are gone.
14.Let us bring back those beautiful memories.
15.by planting more and more trees.
16.Thank you for listening.
That's all.
It was hard to write this paper for me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Jeny, 

I want to share some tips to help Ethan improve his speaking skills. 

Firstly, remember that stress is important in English. When you see underlined words, it means you should stress them when you say them out loud. Stressing the right words can make your speech clearer and more natural. 

Additionally, here are a few more tips: 

Pay attention to the rhythm of English sentences. English has a natural flow, so try to mimic it when you speak. 

Practice speaking slowly and clearly. This can help you avoid mistakes and make it easier for others to understand you. 

Don't be afraid to make mistakes! Practice makes perfect, so keep speaking, and don't worry too much about being perfect. And by the way, Ethan is doing great! Let’s practice again on Monday. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

1.Hello,my name is Ethan and I'm 7 years old. 

>>Hello (stressed, high pitch), my name is Ethan (stressed) and I'm 7 years old! (high pitch) (big smile) 

2.Today,I want to talk about the importance of trees. 

>>Today (stressed), I want to talk about the importance (stressed) of trees (stressed). 

3.Trees are beautiful. 

>>Trees (stressed) are beautiful (stressed). 

4.The brown wood and the green leaves are Pleasing to the eyes. 

>>The brown wood (stressed) and green leaves (stressed) are pleasing (stressed) to the eyes (stressed). 

5.A garden full of trees in bloom is lovely Sight too. 

>>A garden full of trees in bloom (stressed) is a lovely sight (stressed) too (high pitch)! 

6.They provide birds a home and shelter. 

>>They provide (stressed) birds a home (stressed) and shelter (stressed). 

7.Trees give us fruits. 

>>Trees give us fruits (stressed). 

8.It gives us shade. 

>> It gives us shade (stressed) (Can be said in a single breath for flow). 

9.Above all it gives us much need air. 

>>Above all (stressed), it gives us much-needed air (stressed). 

10.But today because of man's greed trees are being cut down I'm large numbers. 

>>But today, because of man's greed (stressed), trees are being cut down in large numbers (stressed).  

11.Yet there were a time people used to gather together under large trees 

>>Yet, there was a time (stressed) when people used to gather together (stressed) under large trees (stressed). 

12.They met,they talked,they made friends with each other. 

>>They met (stressed), they talked (stressed), they made friends (stressed) with each other. 

13.But those good old days are gone. 

>>But those good old days (stressed) are gone. 

14.Let us bring back those beautiful memories by planting more and more trees. 

>>Let's us bring back (stressed) those beautiful memories, by planting more and more trees (stressed)! 

15.Thank you for listening. 

>>Thank you (stressed) for listening! 

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