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Language that I dislike the sound of

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I haven't heard many foreign languages, so I can't choose a language that I dislike the sound of. Just in my experience, sometimes the loud sound of Chinese makes me irritated. While traveling abroad, I have experienced the rudeness of Chinese people such as cutting in line. They break some rules and chat loudly without any consideration of others.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Absolutely! Sometimes, it's not really the sound that makes us feel annoyed and irritated, but the behavior itself. Like what we've discussed in class, sometimes, the voice of some people can be irritating to us because of a previous bad experience with them.
- T. Caitlyn
I haven't heard many foreign languages, so I can't choose a language that I dislike the sound of. 
>> CORRECT 
Just in my experience, sometimes the loud sound of Chinese makes me irritated. 
>> CORRECT 
While traveling abroad, I have experienced the rudeness of Chinese people such as cutting in line. 
>> CORRECT 
They break some rules and chat loudly without any consideration of others.
>> CORRECT 
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