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When do you feel most energized? What do you like to do with that energy?

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I feel energized every day.
I play with that emergy.
Like playing with freinds.

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Hi Sunny!
The kind of thinking that you express is outstanding.
You just have to focus on the clarity of your sentences.
Find new ways to effectively convey your message.
Be simple and direct.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I feel energized every day.
>> Correct
I play with that emergy.
>> I have fun with that energy.
Like playing with freinds.
>> I use it when I'm playing with my friends. 
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