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But only the things that you need and save the extra coins and bills. = But only spend on the things you need and save the extra coins and bills.
—> Do these two sentences have the same meaning?

What do you love about your country?
—> I love my country¡¯s music. It makes me happy!

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Nicely done, Min Ju! I appreciate all your hard work! 
-Teacher Angela

But only the things that you need and save the extra coins and bills. = But only spend on the things you need and save the extra coins and bills.
—> Do these two sentences have the same meaning?
>> The difference between the two sentences are in clarity and grammatical correctness.
The second sentence is clearer and grammatically correct, it effectively conveys the intended meaning. The first sentence does not fully convey the same meaning due to its incomplete structure.

QUESTION: What do you love about your country?
—> I love my country¡¯s music. It makes me happy!
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