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About both the New challenge

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What is the most challenging thing about running your business?

I think, l has two both about most challanging.

First,
the most hard thing in my challange is language. To learn language is very difficult. But, it is very interisting and fun thing.
It is not easy in the world. it is difficult and fun.

Second,
it is teach an envernonmental education.
Every people doesn't know about envernonmental problem well. However, i 'm going to try of it. Because, this problem is very important for our world.

We always think to hard about new challenge.
The new Challange is wonderfulland beautif things in our life.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko. Yes, I think new challenges should be welcomed and not feared. They could bring good changes. We should embrace them.

I think, l has two both about most challanging.
>>> I think, there are two most challenging things.
First, the most hard thing in my challange is language. 
>>First, the hardest challenge for me is language.   
To learn language is very difficult. 
>>>   correct
But, it is very interisting and fun thing.
>>>  But, it is a very interesting and fun thing. 
It is not easy in the world. it is difficult and fun.
>>> It is not an easy thing in this world. It is difficult but fun.  
Second, it is teach an envernonmental education.
>>> Second, it is to teach environmental education.  
Every people doesn't know about envernonmental problem well. 
>>>   Most people don't know about environmental problems well. 
However, i 'm going to try of it. Because, this problem is very important for our world.
>>>  However, I'm going to try of it because, this problem is very important for our world. 
We always think to hard about new challenge.
>>> We always think new challenges are too hard.  
The new Challange is wonderfulland beautif things in our life.
>>>  The new challenge is wonderful and a beautiful thing in life. 
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