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HOMEWORK:
Does it bother you that people gamble on sporting events?

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I don't think gambling is a bad thing because you can do good things with that profit.
Korea covers the country's expenses through sports gambling. With the money earned from gambling, they start various industries and policies.
This means that other countries also develop different policies through income and help the poor.
But I think it's bad to abuse it. Illegal is bad. Because illegal can't be money and there are no limits, many people invest money, lose money, and ruin their lives.

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Hello Mr. Lee!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. As always, you are very passionate about expressing yourself. Keep up the good work!
I would have to agree with you, here in the Philippines, there is an agency that operates "lotto" and their income helps people who are not capable of sending themselves to the hospital. It's a great help. It must become bad when people become addicted to gambling.
T, Aki~


I don't think gambling is a bad thing because you can do good things with that profit.
>>> CORRECT!

Korea covers the country's expenses through sports gambling.
>>> CORRECT!

With the money earned from gambling, they start various industries and policies.
>>> CORRECT!

This means that other countries also develop different policies through income and help the poor.
>>> CORRECT!

But I think it's bad to abuse it. Illegal is bad. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because illegal can't be money and there are no limits, many people invest money, lose money, and ruin their lives.
>>> CORRECT!
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