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The reason why people go camping is to feel fresh. Because if you're in the city, you can't breathe good air. But if you go camping, you will feel fresh because you go to a place with good air.

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The reason why people go camping is to feel fresh.
>> The reason people go camping is to feel refreshed.
Because if you're in the city, you can't breathe good air.
>> Because if you're in the city, you can't breathe clean air.
But if you go camping, you will feel fresh because you go to a place with good air.
>>But if you go camping, you will feel refreshed because you're in a place with fresh air.
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