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Colors associated with the Korean Lunar New Year

작성자: 김*민
2024-05-21 446

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I think five colors-red, yellow, blue, white and black- are associated with the Korean Lunar New Year.
I found that those colors are associated with five cardinal colors that Northeast Asian have believed importantly.

I said that Korean eat "Tteokguk" in Lunar New Year.
Tteokguk is a kind of soup made of sliced bar rice cake, and people garnish soup with eggs and dried laver.
So when you see tteokguk, you can watch yellow, white, and black colors.

And people make and eat Korea style pancake, skewering ingredients and frying.
The recipe of this pancake are different from house to house, but It usually made of crab sticks, eggs or pickled radish, green onion, and beef.
You can watch red, yellow, green(close to blue) and brown(close to black).

Also children wear "Jeogori(a kind of traditional jacket)" with multicolored stripes.
There are many colors in Jeogori, but the main colors are red, yellow, blue, and white.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for writing your homework, Min. Well done! I've learned about the associated colors with the Lunar New Year. ^^
-Khai

I think five colors-red, yellow, blue, white and black- are associated with the Korean Lunar New Year.

>> I think there are five colors which are red, yellow, blue, white, and black. These colors are associated with the Korean Lunar New Year.

I found that those colors are associated with five cardinal colors that Northeast Asian have believed importantly.

>> I found that those colors are associated with the five cardinal colors which Northeast Asians have believed to be important.

I said that Korean eat "Tteokguk" in Lunar New Year.

>> I said that Koreans eat "Tteokguk" in the Lunar New Year.

Tteokguk is a kind of soup made of sliced bar rice cake, and people garnish soup with eggs and dried laver.

>> Tteokguk is a kind of soup made of sliced bar rice cake, and people garnish the soup with eggs and dried laver.

So when you see tteokguk, you can watch yellow, white, and black colors.

>> So when you see tteokguk, you can see yellow, white, and black colors.

And people make and eat Korea style pancake, skewering ingredients and frying.

>> And people make and eat Korea-style pancakes, skewering ingredients, and frying.

The recipe of this pancake are different from house to house, but It usually made of crab sticks, eggs or pickled radish, green onion, and beef.

>> The recipe for this pancake is different from house to house, but it is usually made of crab sticks, eggs or pickled radish, green onion, and beef.

You can watch red, yellow, green(close to blue) and brown(close to black).

>> You can see red, yellow, green (close to blue), and brown (close to black).

Also children wear "Jeogori(a kind of traditional jacket)" with multicolored stripes.

>> Also, children wear "Jeogori” (a kind of traditional jacket) with multicolored stripes.

There are many colors in Jeogori, but the main colors are red, yellow, blue, and white.

>> CORRECT


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