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What are the top three things you plan to do first when you arrive in Canada?

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My plan is experience that is walking around main city, my house, and meeting the foreign people.
I want to walk around confidently.
For it, i think i have to well know this country.

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Hi, Hye Yeon! Your plan sounds exciting! Exploring the main city and meeting new people will definitely help you get to know Canada better. Walking around confidently will come with time and experience. Enjoy your adventure!
~T.Jenna

My plan is experience that is walking around main city, my house, and meeting the foreign people.
>>My plan is to experience walking around the main city, my neighborhood, and meeting new people.
I want to walk around confidently.
Correct, or
>>I want to explore the city with confidence.
For it, i think i have to well know this country.
>>For that, I think I need to know this country well.
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