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What is the most difficult thing about learning English? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences

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2024-05-18 301

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I think english grameer is a different from korean.
so i was a lot of time change turn the grammer.
i don't know yet.

it's so hard for me. but i studied english everyday in liavery.
and i was have been new friend in Australia yesterday.
i think i will be meet him many time.
then i better the english grammer.
i hope to better english well.
because i should get a job in australia.
( i was moved in australia 2 weeks ago.
i has a working hoilday visa.)

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hi, how are you?
i'm here for interview today. so can i talk to your boss?
i'm haeun. but my english name is eve. it's easy right?
thank you for inviting me to the interview.
i grew up in seoul, korea.

although i was in korea. i worked at the restaunrt and cafe.
so i can do anything. i has a lot of expersice.
and me house is just near the company. i living in spring hills.
it takes about is 15 minutes on foot.
i don't have job yet. and i don't go to the school. just study for myself.

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Hello, Eve. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. I appreciate it. I hope I will be able to help you out in the area of grammar, especially. English takes time to learn so just give it time and you'll get the hang of it in no time. I hope your stay in Australia is going great and I'm happy to know you met a new friend who can help you practice your English skills ^^ I hope the suggested dialogue will be helpful for you in your interviews as well. Good luck! See you in class soon. ~Jane :) 


I think english grameer is a different from Korean. so i was a lot of time change turn the grammar.
>> I think English grammar is different from Korean so I often interchange the words. 

i don't know yet.
>> I'm still learning how to do that. 

it's so hard for me. but i studied english everyday in liavery.
>> It's hard for me but I study English every day in the library. 

and i was have been new friend in Australia yesterday.
>> And I met a new friend in Australia yesterday. 

i think i will be meet him many time.
>> I think I will meet him often. 

then i better the english grammar.
>> Then I will be better at English grammar. 

i hope to better english well. because i should get a job in australia.
>> I hope to be better at English because I should get a job in Australia. 

( i was moved in australia 2 weeks ago. i has a working hoilday visa.)
>> I moved to Australia 2 weeks ago but I'm on a working holiday visa. 

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hi, how are you?
>> Hi, how are you? 

i'm here for interview today. so can i talk to your boss?
>> I'm here for an interview today so can I talk to your boss? 

i'm haeun. but my english name is eve. it's easy right?
>> I'm Ha Eun but my English name is Eve, it's easier right? 

thank you for inviting me to the interview.
>> Thank you for inviting me to the interview. 

i grew up in seoul, Korea.
>> I grew up in Seoul, Korea. 

although i was in korea. i worked at the restaunrt and cafe.
>> When I was in Korea, I worked at restaurants and cafes. 

so i can do anything. i has a lot of expersice.
>> So I can do anything because I have a lot of experience. 

and me house is just near the company. 
>> My house is close to the workplace. 

i living in spring hills.
>> I live in Spring Hill. 

it takes about is 15 minutes on foot.
>> It takes about 15 minutes on foot. 

i don't have job yet. and i don't go to the school. just study for myself.
>> I don't have a job yet and I don't go to school but I'm studying by myself. 

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