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which actor would you like to change places with and why ?

작성자: 박*호
2024-05-16 486

회원님의 영작문

I like movies that depict a person's entire life from birth to death.
So, I really like the movie Forrest Gump.
This movie is the story of the entire life of Forrest Gump, a lonely boy with a bit of a disability and low intelligence.
Famous actor Tom Hanks played the main role in this movie.
He grows up with a pure and kind heart under the care of his devoted and strong mother.
He realized that he had the talent to run better than anyone else, became an American football player, went on to high school and college, and later participated in the Vietnam War, making many achievements.
He also becomes a table tennis player and contributes to Ping Pong relations with China.
And he makes a lot of money from shrimp fishing.
Later, he meets his first person again, has a son, and ends his life peacefully.
After watching this movie, I feel like I have become the main character and lived the life of that person.
That's why I wish I could act there instead of Tom Hanks.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Sun! 

Thanks for doing your homework. See you tomorrow!

- Kristine ^^ 

I like movies that depict a person's entire life from birth to death.
>> I like movies that depict a person's entire life, from birth to death.
So, I really like the movie Forrest Gump.
>> Correct.
This movie is the story of the entire life of Forrest Gump, a lonely boy with a bit of a disability and low intelligence.
>> Forrest Gump is a lonely boy with disability and low IQ.
Famous actor Tom Hanks played the main role in this movie.
>> Correct.
He grows up with a pure and kind heart under the care of his devoted and strong mother.
>> Correct.
He realized that he had the talent to run better than anyone else, became an American football player, went on to high school and college, and later participated in the Vietnam War, making many achievements.
>> After realizing that he was the best runner in the world, he started playing American football, advanced through high school and college, and eventually joined the Vietnam War, where he made numerous accomplishments.
He also becomes a table tennis player and contributes to Ping Pong relations with China.
>> He also becomes a table tennis player and contributes to Ping-Pong relations with China.
And he makes a lot of money from shrimp fishing.
>> He also makes a good living by catching shrimps.
Later, he meets his first person again, has a son, and ends his life peacefully.
>> He eventually runs into his first person again, has a son, and passes away peacefully.
After watching this movie, I feel like I have become the main character and lived the life of that person.
>> I feel like I've taken on the role of the main character and lived that person's life after seeing this movie.
That's why I wish I could act there instead of Tom Hanks.
>> I would love to play his role instead of Tom Hanks.
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